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Rwby Draft finished but yet to be painted! by ALEXACEDEATH

:iconstarlingkia:
I'm just going to start of saying that I love that sycth design. I can't wait to see it's coloring. I really like her character design and clothing. However one of the things that are bothering me is her skirt. Is it suppose to be an asymmetrical design because to my sewing/fabric knowledge if a skirt flairs out like that, it should be longer on that side. What I mean to say is that if her skirt is all one even length than that side should be a bit shorter. The other article of clothing that is bothering me is the bottom end of the cloak. That last bit of it, I would think, wouldn't be standing up so straight unless she is in mid-spin. I would like to see some fold/wrinkle lines in that part to give it more fabric life. Your hands and body proportions look very nice to my eyes. I could see her chin being a bit pointy, but if that is the style you are going for, then I think it is fine. My last comment is that she seems very ridged and stiff, especially in the legs. It seems to be a little unnatural.
I am really excited to see it completely finished and colored. I love what colors you do have on in right now and can't wait to see it pop!
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:iconalexacedeath:
ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Why thanks so much! Yeah I know what you mean with the cloak, Im still pretty bad at drawing feet so Im just using that for now, and I know what you mean, it needs more wrinkles, once my Ps gets fixed that will be one of the main things Ill fix. And yeah I know what you mean with the stiff feeling Im still trying to work with that Ill try to fix it with ps as well. As for the skirt, I know it doesnt look like it, but Its a wind effect (I hope this makes more sense once I finish painting and add the background). Anyway thanks a ton for the critique Ill use all these pointers! :D

P.s. are you familiar with the character?
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:iconstarlingkia:
StarlingKia Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah once the background gets done I'm sure the skirt and everything will make sense and make the whole picture even more awesome. And no I am not familiar with this character.

P.S: The other image you want me to critique is on my list to get done. Sorry but school got in the way. I promise I won't forget to do it. ^^;
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:iconalexacedeath:
ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
No worries, and thanks a lot! :D :D :D :D

P.s. the character is from an upcoming series [link] although a quick warning wear suglasses because the awesomeness may blind you! :D :D :D
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StarlingKia Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pardon my language but.... :nuu: Holy shit that was awesome!!!!! Thank you very very much for showing me that. I might have to draw some fan art for this. ( My mind is still blown. )
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ALEXACEDEATH Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
hehehe thought youd like it, and no prob! Cant wait to see what you have in mind to draw, :D Right now Im planning to draw white! :D :D :D :D
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